<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra">Hi all,</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">The comments were resolved, including the deletion suggested by Ed. With the review done by Ayden, Stephanie, Matt, Ed  and myself and there was no objection from the rest, I interpret that as we can submit the NCSG comment on CC2. the working group will have its confcall tomorrow and there is an update about community comments on the agenda, it will be good to submit prior to that.</div><div class="gmail_extra">I attached the latest version that I will submit.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Rafik<br><div class="gmail_quote"><br></div><div class="gmail_quote">2017-05-26 20:47 GMT+09:00 Ayden Férdeline <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div>I can support this change. </div><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888">
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        </div>On Fri, May 26, 2017 at 12:45 pm, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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            <div class="gmail_extra">Thanks for the comment.</div>
            <div class="gmail_extra">I can delete that line since it won't change the meaning of what precedes it. I will wait for other members if they are fine with that change.</div>
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                <div class="gmail_quote">2017-05-26 20:27 GMT+09:00 Edward Morris <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:egmorris1@toast.net" target="_blank">egmorris1@toast.net</a>></span>:
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<div style="color:rgb(34,34,34)">I've made a suggested edit (although have not removed the line, pending receipt of others views) in paragraph 7. Specifically calling for contractual compliance in the ICANN environment traditionally has meant zealous enforcement of alleged intellectual monopoly rights. Contracts should be enforced: agreements are made to be honoured. That doesn't need to be stated. Making a specific point calling for contractual compliance plays into the IPC and CSG positions; I'd suggest that it is counterproductive for the NCSG to specifically call for such action. The line in question:</div>

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<div style="color:rgb(34,34,34)"><em><span id="m_5980396986913309663m_-6113323590422584815docs-internal-guid-14368509-4478-b012-8434-a2aa3870e38e"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-ligatures:normal;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-alternates:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">ensuring contractual compliance of the Registry Agreement is key to this discussion as it enables a proper maintenance of what has been agreed between the parties. </span></span>
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                <div style="color:rgb(34,34,34)">The rest of the document is a good compromise between competing views in the NCSG on a variety of issues. I'm happy to support if the above line is removed. Otherwise count me as an abstain: strict contractual compliance, in ICANN-speak,
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            <div><span style="font-family:tahoma,arial,sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><span><b>From</b>: "Rafik Dammak" <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>><br>
<b>Sent</b>: Friday, May 26, 2017 11:44 AM<br>
<b>To</b>: "ncsg-pc" <<a href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is" target="_blank">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>>, "Martin Pablo Silva Valent" <<a href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com" target="_blank">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a>>, "Poncelet Ileleji" <<a href="mailto:pileleji@ymca.gm" target="_blank">pileleji@ymca.gm</a>>, "Marilia Maciel" <<a href="mailto:mariliamaciel@gmail.com" target="_blank">mariliamaciel@gmail.com</a>>, "Milan, Stefania" <<a href="mailto:Stefania.Milan@eui.eu" target="_blank">Stefania.Milan@eui.eu</a>>, "Ayden Férdeline" <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>, "Matthew Shears" <<a href="mailto:matthew@intpolicy.com" target="_blank">matthew@intpolicy.com</a>>, "Stephanie Perrin" <<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoront<wbr>o.ca</a>>, "Edward Morris" <<a href="mailto:egmorris1@toast.net" target="_blank">egmorris1@toast.net</a>>, "Juan Manuel Rojas" <<a href="mailto:jumaropi@yahoo.com" target="_blank">jumaropi@yahoo.com</a>><br>
</span><b>Subject</b>: Re: Reminder Comment on GNSO Community Comment 2 (CC2) on New gTLD Subsequent Procedures</span>
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                            <div class="gmail_extra">Hi all,</div>

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                            <div class="gmail_extra">it is time to make a decision with regard to the CC2 comment <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/133uzvDQI__EmNGhqiDkHW0EvfvKOwLE9m7ozNIZUVNY/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/133uzvDQI__EmNGhqiDkHW0Ev<wbr>fvKOwLE9m7ozNIZUVNY/edit</a>.
                                please review it and send your vote. we need clear support here. if we can reach conclusion by Today 23:59UTC it will be good since we also have to submit the SO/AC accountability comment.</div>

                            <div class="gmail_extra">@Avri did the staff start working on the comments report? </div>

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                            <div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div>

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                                <div class="gmail_quote">2017-05-25 8:45 GMT+09:00 Rafik Dammak <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>></span>:

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                                        <div dir="ltr">hi all,
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                                            <div>we need to finish reviewing and finalizing the CC2 comment. the public consultation ended this Monday, we don't have much time to extend. I suggested previously Wednesday as the deadline but I only saw a comment
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                                            <div>I would like to ask all members of policy committee to review the draft and then share their positions about endorsing it or not. for those who make comments in the google doc, please suggest wording or new
                                                text, that would be helpful to solve them.</div>

                                            <div>Thanks,</div>

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                                            <div>Best,</div>

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                                                    <br>Date: 2017-05-22 9:01 GMT+09:00
                                                    <br>Subject: Comment on GNSO Community Comment 2 (CC2) on New gTLD Subsequent Procedures / Consultation and review
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                                                    <div dir="ltr">Hi all,
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                                                        <div>Bruna kindly volunteered and drafted this response to the Community Comment consultation from the new gTLD subsequent procedures working group for NCSG <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/133uzvDQI__EmNGhqiDkHW0EvfvKOwLE9m7ozNIZUVNY/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/133uzvDQI__EmNGhqiDkHW0Ev<wbr>fvKOwLE9m7ozNIZUVNY/edit</a>. the details about the public consultation are here <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/cc2-new-gtld-subsequent-procedures-2017-03-22-en" target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/pub<wbr>lic-comments/cc2-new-gtld-subs<wbr>equent-procedures-2017-03-22-e<wbr>n</a>.</div>

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                                                        <div>The deadline for submission is the 22nd May, so we have a short time to do so. I think we can attempt a late submission and hopefully be accepted by the working group. We should review, add
                                                            comments, editing and be tidying up the document in the next 3 days and submitting by this Wednesday after endorsement by the policy committee. because of the time constraints, please add wording
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                                                        <div>looking forward your participation and asking those who were involved in the previous new gTLD policy discussion to jump in. </div>

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                                                        <div>Best,</div>

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