<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra">Thanks Adyen for the editing, the comment looks neat.</div><div class="gmail_extra">the ICANN staff is planning to make its response report by 18/19th May, if we want to have our comments included we should submit by this Friday <br>I see that many of our African members agree with the content and I don't see any specific concern in the statement other than the confusion about sampling (i.e. 1400 domain) which was resolved already by removing it due to nonconsensus. I do interpret that we have support from NCSG list.</div><div class="gmail_extra">we need PC members to go through the statement and give their opinion on Friday in order to submit in time.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Rafik</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2017-05-12 5:10 GMT+09:00 Ayden Férdeline <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div>I have just done some edits on the Google Doc too, adding some pleasantries to the introduction, fixing the formatting, and shortening a few sentences to make them easier to read. But I stopped on page 3, because I have not read the report and I can't comment on our arguments. Some of them are giving me pause. I don't know that I disagree with them, I just don't have the background to understand what we are asking versus what the report currently contains. I have deleted a few sentences from the first page which were not consistent with the draft report that I skim read, but I think the entire comment would benefit from review from someone who has actually, comprehensively, read it. <span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br></font></span></div><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><div><br></div><div>- Ayden <br></div></font></span><div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5"><div class="m_-2075756757903711149protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_-2075756757903711149protonmail_signature_block-proton m_-2075756757903711149protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><blockquote type="cite" class="m_-2075756757903711149protonmail_quote"><div>-------- Original Message --------<br></div><div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] African DNS market Study NCSG comment / Endorsement<br></div><div>Local Time: 11 May 2017 4:35 AM<br></div><div>UTC Time: 11 May 2017 03:35<br></div><div>From: <a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.<wbr>utoronto.ca</a><br></div><div>To: <a href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is" target="_blank">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><p><span style="font-size:undefinedpx" class="m_-2075756757903711149size"><span style="font-family:'Lucida Grande'" class="m_-2075756757903711149font">I did an edit on the
Google doc, just to smooth the additions and different style
of the various authors. I have no content to add,
sorry....but please feel free to edit if I have destroyed the
sense of a given segment. It seems to me it could go now.</span></span><br></p><p><span style="font-size:undefinedpx" class="m_-2075756757903711149size"><span style="font-family:'Lucida Grande'" class="m_-2075756757903711149font">Stephanie</span></span><br></p><div><br></div><div class="m_-2075756757903711149moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-05-10 21:45, Rafik Dammak
wrote:<br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra">Hi Dorothy,<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><br></div><div>are you proposing those changes below to be included in the
document as a response to Ayden?<br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra">the document to be tidied-up and need
someone to go through at least checking format and
proofreading.<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">for submission, my suggestion was to do
it by Friday so we should finalize review and endorsement by
then. definitely, we shouldn't miss that extended deadline<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Best,<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Rafik<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div>2017-05-10 23:43 GMT+09:00 dorothy g <span dir="ltr"><<a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="mailto:dgdorothydg@gmail.com" target="_blank">dgdorothydg@gmail.com</a>></span>:<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div>1. Include country profiles <br></div><div><br></div><div>2. Use global references for determining
methodology of analysis<br></div><div><br></div><div>3. Increase the emphasis on out reach and
education to get greater buy in of stakeholders
especially in response to questionnaires.<br></div><div><br></div><div>4. Include scenarios for typology of countries.
E.g. Nacent, Mid-range, Mature, <br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>I am afraid this will be another case where we
discuss and then end up not sending anything because
of timing. How much more time are we giving this?
Who finalises?<br></div><div>best<br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div><div class="m_-2075756757903711149h5">On Wed, May 10, 2017 at 10:51 AM,
Rafik Dammak <span dir="ltr"><<a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br></div></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div class="m_-2075756757903711149h5"><div dir="ltr"><div><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Hi Ayden,<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Thanks for the
comments,<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><br></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><span><div>2017-05-10
22:30 GMT+09:00 Ayden Férdeline <span dir="ltr"><<a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span>:<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div>Hi,<br></div><div><br></div><div>I don't think this comment is ready
for submission just yet, but it is
getting there. I am very grateful to
Dorothy for drafting it, and to all
those who have contributed comments.
Alas, I think we need to be more
specific about what we would like
done differently next time the study
is conducted. <br></div><div><br></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div>can you make the suggetsion directly
in the document? <br></div><span><div> <br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div>I am also not sure that the third
point is correct. It was not that
1,400 domains out of 4.1 million
were analysed; it was that surveys
were sent to 1,400 respondents from
six sectors (some of whom were
registrants). Even if it was
referring to domains, my hunch is
that a sample size of 1,400 domains
probably is representative. <br></div><div><br></div><div>I also am curious about the comment
Anriette made on-list about budget;
I wonder if it was a case of the
external consultants who drafted the
report underbidding for the project,
or if ICANN paid a suitable amount
for the work but they did not pay
the local contractors a suitable
amount for their contributions, or
something else altogether. I am not
sure we need to bring this into our
comment but it is interesting to me.<span class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784HOEnZb"><span style="color:rgb(136,136,136)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"></span></span><br></div></div><span class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784HOEnZb"><span style="color:rgb(136,136,136)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><div><br></div></span></span></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div>understood, but I am not sure that is
the comment is the right place for that
while we can ask details about the
budgeting planned for those studies and
which criteria for informational
purpose.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div>Rafik <br></div><div><div class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945h5"><div><br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784HOEnZb"><span style="color:rgb(136,136,136)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><div class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784m_4857256973632677416protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784m_4857256973632677416protonmail_signature_block-user"><div><br></div></div></div></span></span><div class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784HOEnZb"><div class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784h5"><blockquote class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784m_4857256973632677416protonmail_quote" type="cite"><div>-------- Original Message
--------<br></div><div>Subject: [NCSG-PC]
African DNS market Study
NCSG comment / Endorsement<br></div><div>Local Time: May 10, 2017
6:01 AM<br></div><div>UTC Time: May 10, 2017
5:01 AM<br></div><div>From: <a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a><br></div><div>To: ncsg-pc <<a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is" target="_blank">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>>,
dorothy g <<a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="mailto:dgdorothydg@gmail.com" target="_blank">dgdorothydg@gmail.com</a>><br></div><div><br></div><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi all,<br></div><div><br></div><div>we got several comments
from NCSG members on the
draft (<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ee3gKApsPyKqDE70GSmTjxbxl0DejNLV3Jfry4dAt1Y/edit" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docum<wbr>ent/d/1ee3gKApsPyKqDE70GSmTjxb<wbr>xl0DejNLV3Jfry4dAt1Y/edit</a>)
and I am really happy to
see several
fellow Africans participate
in the review.<br></div><div>I could get from ICANN
staff to accept the
submission of NCSG comment
after the deadline and by
this week. I would like to
kindly ask you to review
the draft for endorsement
or not in order to submit
it by this Friday.<br></div><div>Thanks.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div><div>Rafik<br></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div>----------
Forwarded message
----------<br></div><div>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Rafik
Dammak</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>></span><br></div><div>Date: 2017-05-05
18:40 GMT+09:00<br></div><div>Subject: African
DNS market Study NCSG
comment / Call for
comments<br></div><div>To: "<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a><wbr>"
<<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a><wbr>><br></div><div>Cc: ncsg-pc <<a href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_quote"><div>Hi all,<br></div><div><br></div><div>Dororthy kindly
drafted a NCSG
comment ( <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ee3gKApsPyKqDE70GSmTjxbxl0DejNLV3Jfry4dAt1Y/edit" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docu<wbr>ment/d/1ee3gKApsPyKqDE70GSmTjx<wbr>bxl0DejNLV3Jfry4dAt1Y/edit</a>.
) about the
African DNS Market
Study (<a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/africa-dns-market-study-2017-03-11-en" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/public-<wbr>comments/africa-dns-market-stu<wbr>dy-2017-03-11-en</a>) <br></div><div><br></div><div>While the
dealdine is for
the 5th May, I
already sent a
request to the
ICANN staff
telling them that
we are going to
make a late
submission and
asking for
extension. I would
like to ask
members and in
particular those
from Africa to go
through the draft
in google doc for
review and
comments. We
should submit this
comment by next
week after NCSG
Policy Committee
endorsment based
on members
feebdack here and
in the document.<br></div><div>It will be
great of you can
make comments and
any suggestion for
edits by Tuesday
9th May so we can
resolve them
before
submission. <br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div>Rafik<br></div><div dir="ltr"><span><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size"><br class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784m_4857256973632677416gmail-m_-1017518765137812358gmail-m_7110549939002699006gmail-kix-line-break">==============================<wbr>=====================</span></span></span></span></p><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><a style="text-decoration-line:none" href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/africa-dns-market-study-2017-03-11-en" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Draft 2016 African Domain Name System Market
Study</span></span></a><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size"> (ADNSMS)</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">The NCSG welcomes the opportunity to comment on
the Draft 2016
African Domain
Name Market
Study carried
out by a
consortium led
by the South
Africa
Communications
Forum.</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Methodology</span></span></span></span><br></p><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">This is a first attempt to present a snapshot of
the African
Domain Name
Market. The
report sets
out clearly
the data
challenges
that hampered
analysis in
conducting
this baseline
survey. The
study
indicates that
poor response
levels (22% to
the online
survey) could
have been
affected by
the length of
the
questionnaire,
and the
difficulty in
getting
responses for
the full set
of six
specifically
targeted
questionnaires
registrar,
regulator etc
per country.
The report’s
authors note
that the
survey
questionnaire
could have
been
streamlined.
A Country DNS
success index
was developed
by the authors
to rank the
health of
African DNS
markets. </span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Comment: 1. It would be good if the report made
reference to
other criteria
for
benchmarking
used in other
regions to
support the
choice of the
criteria used
in the DNS
success index.</span></span></span></span><br></p><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size"> 2. Full discussion of the
methodological
deficiencies
and lessons
learnt should
be included in
an annex to
support the
next iteration
of the
(ADNSMS)</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Section 5 - Africa Rising</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Comment:</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><ol style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li style="list-style-type:decimal;font-size:11pt;font-family:arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline" dir="ltr"><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">In order to make cross-country comparisons more
realistic it
may be useful
to look at the
size of a
given
country’s
economy and
population in
comparison to
its existing
DNS market.
This is done
for webpages
on pages 85
& 86.</span></span><br></p></li></ol><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">2. Much of the information in this section can
be found in
other sources
and could be
put in annex.
The slimmed
down version
included in
the main
report could
focus on
‘value
addition’ to
the main
arguments and
make use of
the excellent
summative
graphics some
of which are
striking in
their
originality.</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Section 6 Key Features of the African DNS Market</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Comment:</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><ol style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li style="list-style-type:decimal;font-size:11pt;font-family:arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline" dir="ltr"><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">This section provides useful background
information
but it could
benefit from
some more
rigor in
making its
economic
arguments.
These include
the analysis
of demand
(section 6.3)
and the
valuation of
the African
DNS industry
(section 6.5)
. In the first
instance more
specific cases
should be
given to
support the
arguments
given for
changes that
would increase
demand e.g.
improved local
hosting
infrastructure.
In the second
instance
valuing simply
on the prices
that have been
fixed for
service does
not take into
account the
multiplier
effects within
the economy.
Given the
advice to drop
prices and the
lack of
evidence of
the resulting
increase in
uptake in all
country
markets, the
current
approach could
result in
reduced
valuation.
This is just
to point out
that the
approach may
benefit from a
review.</span></span><br></p></li></ol><div><br></div><ol start="2" style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li style="list-style-type:decimal;font-size:11pt;font-family:arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline" dir="ltr"><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">The detailed information on certain countries is
one of the
best features
of this
study. It may
be useful to
present a
country
profile for
each African
country, a
kind of
summary flash
card that
would allow us
to appreciate
where
information is
lacking and
which
indicators
will need to
be tracked in
each context.</span></span><br></p></li></ol><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Section 7. Analysis of Domain Name Uptake
Across the
region</span></span></span></span><br></p><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size"> (see prior comment on
methodology)</span></span></span></span><br></p><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Comment: </span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><ol style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li style="list-style-type:decimal;font-size:11pt;font-family:arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline" dir="ltr"><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Please see above request for country profiles for
all countries</span></span><br></p></li></ol><div><br></div><ol start="2" style="margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt"><li style="list-style-type:decimal;font-size:11pt;font-family:arial;color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;vertical-align:baseline" dir="ltr"><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">The table presenting the rankings in section 7.2
should be
repositioned
as it is
currently
split between
2 pages.</span></span><br></p></li></ol><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Section 8 Key success factors registries</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Section 9 - Growth Outlook</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">The part of this study that needs to be given
more substance
relates to the
business
models that
will grow the
African Domain
Name System
Market. It is
important that
the study
includes an
in-depth
treatment of
this linked to
key factors at
the country
context.</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="background-color:transparent" class="m_-2075756757903711149highlight"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:11pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">The observatory is clearly necessary but the
terms of
reference for
the study not
only focused
on the
observation of
what is
happening but
the deliberate
intervention
to speed
growth. The
study lists
out factors
but these are
not put in the
form of
business
models adapted
to specific
starting
points.</span></span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><div><br></div><p style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt" dir="ltr"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:12pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">“The goal of this study is to identify and define
the strengths
and weaknesses
in the
industry
ecosystem
within the
Africa region
and develop
recommendations
on how to
advance the
industry and
bring it
closer to the
opportunities
available.”
From Section
1 in the ICANN
request for
comment.</span></span></span><br></p><div><br></div><div><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51)" class="m_-2075756757903711149colour"><span style="font-family:arial" class="m_-2075756757903711149font"><span style="font-size:12pt" class="m_-2075756757903711149size">Overall the study is an impressive piece of work
given the void
it comes to
fill. It
should inspire
many others to
systematic
research on
these issues.</span></span></span><br></div></span></div><div class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784m_4857256973632677416gmail-m_-1017518765137812358gmail-HOEnZb"><div class="m_-2075756757903711149m_-931032629131980945m_365017828290187784m_4857256973632677416gmail-m_-1017518765137812358gmail-h5"><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div></div></div></blockquote></div></div></div><div><br></div></div></div><div><br></div></div></div><div>______________________________<wbr>_________________<br></div><div>NCSG-PC mailing list<br></div><div><a rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" href="mailto:NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is" target="_blank">NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is</a><br></div><div><a href="https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc" rel="noreferrer nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/<wbr>listinfo/ncsg-pc</a><br></div><div><br></div></blockquote></div><div><br></div></div></blockquote></div><div><br></div></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><pre>______________________________<wbr>_________________
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