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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I just spent some time
commenting. I would suggest that we keep working on them, try
to develop a more positive tone that indicates our shared
experience.....but we are not going to get people to sign up
for drafting comments if we reject them. Folks are always
going to be too busy to engage in a fulsome discussion.</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Happy to hear about a
better process....but in the meantime, better to fix this and
boil it down to a couple of pages we can agree on than to give
up, in my view....</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">cheers Stephanie</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">PS I think you used
the old address so I included the new one....</font></font></p>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-03-23 18:27, matthew shears
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<p>Hi all</p>
<p>I am conscious of the impending deadline for these comments
(tomorrow). I recognize that Ayden has put time and thought
into proposing comments for NCSG's consideration. This said,
we have had no substantive discussion of these comments and
their merit on the list or in the PC, nor have we had,
realistically, sufficient time to do so. Because of this I do
not feel that I, as a member of the PC, can endorse these
comments for NCSG. <br>
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<p>The NCSG PC should have a better process in place for ensuring
that there is time to do so in the future and we will,
hopefully, be rectifying this promptly. <br>
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<p>Matthew<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 23/03/2017 11:33, matthew shears
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<p>Hello PC <br>
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<p>Teeing this up as comments are due tomorrow. Please review
these suggested inputs carefully.<br>
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<p>Related docs can be found here.<br>
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<p><a moz-do-not-send="true" class="moz-txt-link-freetext"
href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/atlarge-review-draft-report-2017-02-01-en">https://www.icann.org/public-comments/atlarge-review-draft-report-2017-02-01-en</a><br>
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<div class="moz-forward-container">Your thoughts/suggestions in
the google doc (below) are appreciated asap.<br>
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Thanks.<br>
<br>
Matthew<br>
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<div>Greetings all,<br>
<br>
I have drafted up <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZgdafZs4KBENsb-Kl9GO0l_Bh4gYdQd6F-ORpZPr27s/edit?usp=sharing"
title="on Google Docs" rel="nofollow">on Google Docs</a>
some comments on behalf of the NCSG regarding the Review of
the At-Large community. This is a really rough draft, and
I'd welcome your feedback on what arguments should be
refined, what I might have missed, or what we might want to
remain silent on. I'm not happy with it at the moment, but I
figured it would be better to get some words down onto
paper, and we can refine this together... so please take a
read of the <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZgdafZs4KBENsb-Kl9GO0l_Bh4gYdQd6F-ORpZPr27s/edit?usp=sharing"
title="proposed statement here" rel="nofollow">proposed
statement here</a>, with the understanding that it's
definitely a work-in-progress. And please share your
thoughts, either in the document itself or on this mailing
list!<br>
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Comments are due in three days, so we don't have too long to
get this together unfortunately. You can <a
moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/atlarge-review-draft-report-31jan17-en.pdf"
title="read the draft report here" rel="nofollow">read the
draft report here</a> (PDF link) if you haven't seen it
already.<br>
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<i>A friendly note to those ALAC members who read the NCSG
mailing list: this statement is a work-in-progress, it has
not been endorsed yet by the NCSG Policy Committee, and it
will likely change between now and the time it is
submitted (if it is submitted).</i><br>
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Best wishes,</div>
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