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    <p>I am not really sure that sharing the actual workload of one o
      the more active working groups at the moment is going to encourage
      people to join the next pdp....but here goes, since we are in
      full-on NCSG consultation mode.  <br>
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    <p>By Friday we need to have identified what we cannot live with in
      the latest version of that document I copied out.  The Google link
      is here
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tbk4x7LDzqAazO2ABzjPPkR3gsPcPuBSrECQRpg0CdE/edit#">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tbk4x7LDzqAazO2ABzjPPkR3gsPcPuBSrECQRpg0CdE/edit#</a></p>
    <p>My position is still that RrSg advice and guidance should remain
      outside the policy document, to reduce the likelihood of it
      becoming mandatory, and further constricting the ability of
      contracted parties to determine whether they want to bother trying
      to differentiate between legal vs natural.</p>
    <p>Throughout this document, we have conflated the terms registrant
      and data subject.  This is such a fundamental mistake in the terms
      of applying data protection law ( a legal person is not a data
      subject because they have no rights under the data protection law)
      that I must admit I frequently throw up my hands and walk away. 
      However, this is not the time to walk away, we need to reach
      agreement in NCSG on what we are saying to this gang.</p>
    <p>cheers Stephanie PErrin<br>
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            <td>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] [Ext] RE: Google docs reminder</td>
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            <td>Wed, 5 May 2021 19:18:51 +0000</td>
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            <th valign="BASELINE" nowrap="nowrap" align="RIGHT">From: </th>
            <td>Caitlin Tubergen via Gnso-epdp-team
              <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org"><gnso-epdp-team@icann.org></a></td>
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            <td>Caitlin Tubergen <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org"><caitlin.tubergen@icann.org></a></td>
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            <td>Anderson, Marc <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:mcanderson@verisign.com"><mcanderson@verisign.com></a>,
              <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a> <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org"><gnso-epdp-team@icann.org></a></td>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Marc,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">GAC reps
              have been working on the
              <a href="https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/17qLMYb3HC7qGYPQveXbUq5ZSzvedrQ3t8AdVdrRIdrw/edit#gid=0" moz-do-not-send="true">
                outstanding action items</a>; the two documents are
              linked below:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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            <li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">By Friday 7 May, EPDP Team to
                review
                <u><span style="color:#1155CC"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uA_gEGmfyokKOP0Xft7q__RXVK1Ns_IXzSRoPKusm_E/edit" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">proposed
                      feasibility of unique contacts write up</a></span></u>
                for Initial Report. Please provided comments,
                suggestions and proposed edits in the form of comments.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></li>
            <li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">By Friday 7 May, EPDP Team to
                review updated version of the
                <u><span style="color:#1155CC"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tbk4x7LDzqAazO2ABzjPPkR3gsPcPuBSrECQRpg0CdE/edit#heading=h.gjdgxs" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">legal v.
                      natural write up</a></span></u> and indicate which
                aspects, if any, your group cannot live with for
                inclusion in the Initial Report.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></li>
            <li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">By Friday 7 May, GAC and RrSG
                Team to review the updated version of the
                <u><span style="color:#1155CC"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tbk4x7LDzqAazO2ABzjPPkR3gsPcPuBSrECQRpg0CdE/edit#heading=h.gjdgxs" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">legal v.
                      natural write up</a></span></u> and to indicate to
                EPDP Team if GAC updated proposal and RrSG table,
                respectively, need to be included, where it would be
                included and what aspects it would cover that are
                currently not addressed in the write up. Please provide
                your response via the mailing list.
              </span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></li>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please
              note these are the only two documents currently out for
              review.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best
              regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Berry,
              Marika, and Caitlin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">"Anderson, Marc"
                <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:mcanderson@verisign.com"><mcanderson@verisign.com></a><br>
                <b>Date: </b>Wednesday, May 5, 2021 at 1:57 PM<br>
                <b>To: </b>Caitlin Tubergen
                <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org"><caitlin.tubergen@icann.org></a>,
                <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">"gnso-epdp-team@icann.org"</a>
                <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org"><gnso-epdp-team@icann.org></a><br>
                <b>Subject: </b>[Ext] RE: Google docs reminder<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Caitlin,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Could you
              clarify what document this email refers to?  I’m not sure
              what changes in what document we should be looking at.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Marc</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Gnso-epdp-team
                  <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org"><gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org></a>
                  <b>On Behalf Of </b>Caitlin Tubergen via
                  Gnso-epdp-team<br>
                  <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, May 5, 2021 11:45 AM<br>
                  <b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a><br>
                  <b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [Gnso-epdp-team] Google
                  docs reminder</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
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                  <p><strong><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#993300">Caution:</span></strong><span style="color:#993300"> </span><span style="color:black">This email originated from
                      outside the organization. Do not click links or
                      open attachments unless you recognize the sender
                      and know the content is safe. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Dear EPDP Team,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">We
              appreciate the clarifying edits that have been suggested
              by the GAC but would like to kindly remind everyone that
              the preferred way of suggesting edits is in the form of
              comments. This helps to avoid overwriting edits of others.
              If anyone objects to the edits proposed by GAC reps,
              please indicate this by replying to the edit.
            </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">If there
              are no objections, the Staff Support Team will apply the
              changes suggested.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best
              regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Berry,
              Marika, and Caitlin</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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