<div dir="auto"><div dir="auto">Thank you Milton for the draft, </div><div dir="auto">I totally agree with your comments,</div><div dir="auto">Specifically <span style="font-family:arial;font-size:11pt;font-weight:700;white-space:pre-wrap">Recommendation #19 and 20</span></div><div dir="auto"><br></div><br><br><div class="gmail_quote" dir="auto"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Jan 11, 2021, 15:36 Mueller, Milton L <<a href="mailto:milton@gatech.edu" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">milton@gatech.edu</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I have completed these comments to tbe best of my ability. I have solicited comment or help from Stephanie and others on the EPDP. Unfortunately, I have gotten
absolutely zero contribution. I encourage others to take a look, especially if they are familiar with Phase 1 of EPDP or are on the GNSO Council, just to see if I have made any missteps. Sometimes the legalities and intricacies of GDPR and Whois are complicated.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Georgia Institute of Technology<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> NCSG-Discuss <<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU</a>>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Tomslin Samme-Nlar<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, January 4, 2021 7:35 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: REMINDER: [Public Comment] Call for volunteers - Priority 2 Policy Recommendations for ICANN Board Consideration from EPDP Phase 2<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Just a polite reminder that we need volunteers to draft the NCSG public comment for the
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please let me know at <a href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">
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<p class="MsoNormal">We have a public comment proceeding running for the EPDP Phase 2 Priority 2 Policy Recommendations now up for ICANN Board Consideration.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">More information about the public comment proceeding can be found here :
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https://www.icann.org/public-comments/policy-recommendations-epdp-phase-2-2020-12-03-en</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">A draft Google doc for the comment can be found here: <a href="https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2F1qZWlGo5Xl9bVle4pTIff9RNJFjKSj8jWTY0w_bO78pM%2Fedit%3Fusp%3Ddrivesdk&data=04%7C01%7Cmilton%40GATECH.EDU%7C03c657fb45ec4babba1808d8b111cc49%7C482198bbae7b4b258b7a6d7f32faa083%7C0%7C0%7C637454037293086388%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=LZ4gUFteDcYGsttZ2NztpLQXzb%2FgJ9WPdIcYH56stHo%3D&reserved=0" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qZWlGo5Xl9bVle4pTIff9RNJFjKSj8jWTY0w_bO78pM/edit?usp=drivesdk</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">You can find previous NCSG comments here: <a href="https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fcommunity.icann.org%2Fm%2Fmobile.action%23page%2F40928144&data=04%7C01%7Cmilton%40GATECH.EDU%7C03c657fb45ec4babba1808d8b111cc49%7C482198bbae7b4b258b7a6d7f32faa083%7C0%7C0%7C637454037293096381%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=oVrsXnP1N%2BqPvssRBLFs8pL8V2Mu40fYndAf6YCZvhE%3D&reserved=0" rel="noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">
https://community.icann.org/m/mobile.action#page/40928144</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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