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Thanks all for your suggestions, I've accepted some and rejected others, There seems to be a tendency to add too much verbiage, we need to keep it concise and hard-hitting. </div>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" color="#000000" style="font-size:11pt"><b>From:</b> Ron Wickersham <rjw@itsmyinternet.org><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, December 8, 2019 9:40 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mueller, Milton L <milton@gatech.edu><br>
<b>Cc:</b> NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU <NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [NCSG-Discuss] Milton's Dec 8th Draft & Commentary</font>
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On Sun, 8 Dec 2019, Mueller, Milton L wrote:<br>
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> OK, we have made several modifications and it seems we are very close to an agreement. Can I ask the Policy Committee to look at the draft as it now stands so as to get through the process as quickly as possible?<br>
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Sent the message too soon....<br>
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here are the changes proposed:<br>
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refer specifically to the Registry Agreement contract as what Ethos was <br>
aquiring.<br>
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expand remit of PIR broader than Nonprofits, to include individuals and <br>
other organization who are noncommercial but not officially organized as<br>
nonprofits.<br>
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added note to criterium 4 (specifies noncommercial and not "non profit".<br>
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Can we find workding that is at least as inclusive as the U.S. First <br>
Amendment that is not nationally based? Also can there be any external<br>
enforcement of this "strong commitment" should PIR choose to suspend, etc.<br>
domains as ordererd by some national government?<br>
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expand URS comment with , and not new and existing registrants to the<br>
established ORG domain.<br>
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for the request: urge the ICANN board to step up to both acknoweldge and<br>
meet its clear obligations...<br>
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-ron<br>
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