<div dir="ltr">Hi all!<div><br></div><div>Thank you Tomslin and others that had contribute with comments to this draft! It is certainly challenging to go through the RFCs and establish the correct link with the proposed documents.</div><div><br></div><div>I just made a couple of comments already on the draft. Please let me know if you have questions or concerns. I will try to make some more during the day. </div><div><br></div><div>Thank you!</div><div><br></div><div>Juan Alejo Peirano</div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">El vie., 12 oct. 2018 a las 6:46, farzaneh badii (<<a href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>>) escribió:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Thank you for the draft Tomslin. I appreciate it very much. I have some suggestions and additions. Note that I don't have a technical background so I might be wrong. I will continue putting them in the Google doc but since the deadline is approaching I thought we tackle issues one by one until the deadline:</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">In the draft it says:</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span id="m_-7073486907675278025gmail-docs-internal-guid-58b4476b-7fff-446f-a469-832d6cb73820"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">NCSG believes that support for RDAP lookup queries and responses using both A-label and U-label should be mandatory. Therefore, we propose that section 2.1 of the RDAP Technical Implementation Guide should be updated to “</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">The RDAP server MUST support Internationalized Domain Name (IDN) RDAP lookup queries using A-label</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">and U-label format [RFC5890] for domain names and name server objects”</span></span><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap"><br></span></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">FB: </span></span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"> </span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">don't agree with this. At the moment we are not sure about the searchability function for any of the RDAP lookup queries and it should stay like that until we understand searchability better. I suggest remove.</span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">***</span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span id="m_-7073486907675278025gmail-docs-internal-guid-8e23282d-7fff-1f0a-a2c3-77452dee8e8e"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:10pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">In section 2.2 says “</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">An RDAP server that receives a query string with a mixture of A-labels and U-labels SHOULD reject the query” </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">we suggest that this mixture of labels should respond appropriately instead of reject queries.</span></p></span><br class="m_-7073486907675278025gmail-Apple-interchange-newline"></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">FBI:<span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">my interpretation of RFC is that it allows to be rejected. I suggest delete. see the RFC 7482 : IDNs SHOULD NOT be represented as a mixture of A-labels and U-labels; </span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">that is, internationalized labels in an IDN SHOULD be either all </span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">A-labels or all U-labels. It is possible for an RDAP client to </span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">assemble a query string from multiple independent data sources. Such </span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">a client might not be able to perform conversions between A-labels</span></div><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">and U-labels. An RDAP server that receives a query string with a<span class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> </span></span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">mixture of A-labels and U-labels MAY convert all the U-labels to<span class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> </span></span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">A-labels, perform IDNA processing, and proceed with exact-match<span class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> </span></span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">In such cases, the response to be returned to the query<span class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> </span></span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">source may not match the input from the query source. Alternatively,<span class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> </span></span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Roboto,RobotoDraft,Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">the server MAY refuse to process the query.</span><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap"><br></span></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">****</span></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span id="m_-7073486907675278025gmail-docs-internal-guid-11918bfa-7fff-5084-950e-a869d802d604"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:10pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">Section 4.1 mentions just the A-Labels </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">“The name server's name MUST be specified in the ldhName in A-label format” </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap">and we suggest as in 2.1 that should also include U-Labels.  </span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:10pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:rgb(0,0,0);background-color:transparent;font-variant-numeric:normal;font-variant-east-asian:normal;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