<div dir="ltr">I have been through the document. I feel we can reduce the number of words. I also feel it would be useful to start with some principles. e.g effective participation in meeting; avoiding unnecessary stress etc. We should call for consistency in administrative procedures while acknowledging special circumstances linked to developing countries.<div><br></div><div>Could we not insert some explicit language on the visa issue we were recently discussing? Something that links it to the choice of host?</div><div>best</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Jul 1, 2018 at 3:47 PM, Arsène Tungali <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:arsenebaguma@gmail.com" target="_blank">arsenebaguma@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi,<br>
<br>
Thanks for drafting this comment, Ayden. I have read it and i am glad<br>
it covers many of the ocncerns i too have on the travel guidelines. I<br>
made one or two comments though.<br>
<br>
I hope this cna be approved soon and be sent within time.<br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
Arsene<br>
<br>
2018-07-01 17:07 UTC+02:00, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>:<br>
<span class="">> Dear all,<br>
><br>
> ICANN org is currently requesting feedback on its proposed updates to the<br>
> Community Travel Support Guidelines. These guidelines clarify the<br>
> responsibilities of supported travellers and the duty of care that ICANN org<br>
> has to us. [The comment documents are<br>
</span>> here.](<a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/travel-support-guidelines-2018-05-30-en" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/<wbr>public-comments/travel-<wbr>support-guidelines-2018-05-30-<wbr>en</a>)<br>
<span class="">><br>
> I have prepared a response on behalf of the NCSG. You can find it here:<br>
> <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/<wbr>1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreH<wbr>oQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=<wbr>sharing</a><br>
><br>
> Please consider reviewing the proposed comment and sharing feedback either<br>
> in the Google Doc itself or on this mailing list. The comment window closes<br>
> on 16 July, so please provide your inputs before 12 July so that the NCSG<br>
> Policy Committee has time to review them and to finalise the text. We will<br>
> share the final text on this list prior to submission.<br>
><br>
> Best wishes,<br>
><br>
> Ayden Férdeline<br>
<br>
<br>
</span>-- <br>
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