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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">I have edited a couple of minor typos
(single letters in rust color) and:<br>
@j1: ...agreed upon.<br>
@Ak2 & @m4: Is "data subject" adequately understood here
(defined elsewhere)<br>
@r: include right bracket ")". <br>
Question: Is it a good idea to merge "Objectives and Goals" into
"Deliverables and Timeframes"? <br>
Unsure. Maybe move first sentence back to O & G on its own?
Unsure.<br>
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On 6/28/2018 1:11 PM, Stephanie Perrin wrote:<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Stephanie Perrin</font></font><br>
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"It is a disgrace to be rich and honoured
in an unjust state" -Confucius
邦有道，贫且贱焉，耻也。邦无道，富且贵焉，耻也
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Dr Sam Lanfranco (Prof Emeritus), Econ, York U., CANADA
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