<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Hi Louise, all,<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thanks a lot to the drafting team for putting this comment together—it’s concise, productive, and with a concrete recommendation. Well done!</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I’ve added a couple suggestions to clarify language in places, as well as suggested shifting a couple sentences around so that your idea about getting users involved in knowing whether or not their local operator is rollover-ready is fully explained in one paragraph. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Hope this helps!</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">All the best,</div><div class="">Collin</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">
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</a><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Mar 22, 2018, at 6:08 AM, Michael J. Oghia <<a href="mailto:mike.oghia@gmail.com" class="">mike.oghia@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="">+1 from me too, thanks for this! I just added a few formatting and grammar edits. <div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all" class=""><div class=""><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><font face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" class=""><font style="vertical-align:inherit" class=""><font style="vertical-align:inherit" class="">Best,</font></font></font></div><div class=""><font size="2" face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif" class=""><font style="vertical-align:inherit" class=""><font style="vertical-align:inherit" class="">-Michael</font></font><br class=""></font></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""></div></div></div>
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<br class=""><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Mar 21, 2018 at 11:24 PM, Rafik Dammak <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br class=""><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="gmail_extra">Hi,</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_extra">Thanks Louise for sharing the draft and to the team for the work done with this comment. It is a good example of collaborative work for drafting comment and sharing the burden between several volunteers. as Policy Committee Chair, I encourage such approach for public comment for those volunteering.</div><div class="gmail_extra">@all please review the draft and share your comments, the google doc is in suggestion mode.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_extra">Rafik<div class=""><div class="h5"><br class="">
<br class=""><div class="gmail_quote">2018-03-22 3:23 GMT+09:00 Louise Marie Hurel <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:louise.marie.hsd@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">louise.marie.hsd@gmail.com</a>></span>:<br class=""><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Hi all,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Comments on the Plan to Restart the Root Key Signing Key (KSK) Rollover Process opened early February <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ksk-rollover-restart-2018-02-01-en" target="_blank" class="">this year</a>. For those who have not been following the process that closely, KSK serves as a trust anchor for DNSSEC and was last (and for the first time) signed in 2010. ICANN had scheduled to implement a new key in October. However, they decided to postpone the signing of new cryptographic keys for the DNS after finding that the resolvers used by ISPs and network operators were still not ready and there's a need for more data in prepping for it. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">While the comment is narrow and highly technical in its scope, the overall idea of the process can be read as taking the next step in consolidating a way of periodically changing keys -- thus enhancing security and resilience in the DNS. <br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Tomslin, Dina and I have worked on <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VNxn4UJlk8z196Kz56ucAdgyWp0ua9NmdHexRE1Wkhc/edit" target="_blank" class="">this draft</a> and would be happy to get more comments edits, suggestions on this. Feel free to jump in.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">For more info, see <a href="https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2017-09-27-en" target="_blank" class="">here</a> and <a href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/plan-continuing-root-ksk-rollover-01feb18-en.pdf" target="_blank" class="">here</a>.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">All the best,</div><br clear="all" class=""><div class=""><div class="m_-7208037714605089226m_-3344073801048972165m_-3587903228483903131gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><font color="#444444" class="">Louise Marie Hurel</font></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;" class=""><font color="#444444" face="Arial, sans-serif" class=""><span style="font-size:11px" class="">Cybersecurity Project Coordinator | Igarapé Institute</span></font></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt;" class=""><font face="Arial, sans-serif" color="#444444" class=""><span style="font-size:11px" class="">London School of Economics (LSE) Media and Communications (Data and Society)</span></font></div><div class=""><font size="1" color="#444444" class="">Skype: louise.dias</font></div><div class=""><font size="1" color="#444444" class=""><a href="tel:+44%207468%20906327" value="+447468906327" target="_blank" class="">+44 (0) 7468 906327</a></font></div><div class=""><span style="font-size:x-small" class=""><font color="#0000ff" class=""><u class=""><a href="mailto:l.h.dias@lse.ac.uk" target="_blank" class="">l.h.dias@lse.ac.uk</a> </u></font></span><font size="1" color="#444444" class=""><br class=""></font></div><div class=""><font size="1" color="#444444" class=""><a href="mailto:louise.marie.hsd@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">louise.marie.hsd@gmail.com</a> </font></div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div>
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