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<div><a href="http://www.internetgovernance.org/2017/03/23/re-thinking-icanns-at-large-community/">http://www.internetgovernance.org/2017/03/23/re-thinking-icanns-at-large-community/</a>
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<div>I hope this is useful. </div>
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        </div>On Thu, Mar 23, 2017 at 12:08 pm, Martin Pablo Silva Valent <<a href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com" class="">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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                        <br />I have drafted up <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZgdafZs4KBENsb-Kl9GO0l_Bh4gYdQd6F-ORpZPr27s/edit?usp=sharing" title="on Google Docs" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">on Google Docs</a> some comments on behalf of the
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                        happy with it at the moment, but I figured it would be better to get some words down onto paper, and we can refine this together... so please take a read of the <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZgdafZs4KBENsb-Kl9GO0l_Bh4gYdQd6F-ORpZPr27s/edit?usp=sharing"
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                        <br /><i>A friendly note to those ALAC members who read the NCSG mailing list: this statement is a work-in-progress, it has not been endorsed yet by the NCSG Policy Committee, and it will likely change between now and the time it is submitted (if it is submitted).</i>
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