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<p>I hope this is not the final version, it contain some sections that don't make sense and need to be modified.
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<p>I have added some comments in the Google doc. In particular, I think we need to delete altogether what is now section c), and probably also section d).
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<p>Neither of them make coherent points and they espouse positions which do not have consensus support i n NCSG
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All, </span><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;">
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is the final version of the NCSG comment to the gTLD Subsequent Procedures WG: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1IC7-KJz12XuDBFeEYiDMoh8I1ibks_McW0XqHh_nw/edit#. All comments have been addressed and resolved. Hoping that the policy committee can pick this
up now. </span><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;">
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<b>To: </b>vidushi@CIS-INDIA.ORG<br>
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<b>Sent: </b>Monday, September 19, 2016 11:06:35 AM<br>
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<div>Dear All, <br>
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Here is the final version of the NCSG comment to the gTLD Subsequent Procedures WG: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1IC7-KJz12XuDBFeEYiDMoh8I1ibks_McW0XqHh_nw/edit#. All comments have been addressed and resolved. Hoping that the policy committee can pick
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<div>Dear All, <br>
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I think the idea of deadlines for comments work well. Thanks for the suggestion Farzi.
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Can we make the last day for comments/feedback on the doc this Friday the 9th? That way we should be able to send in the doc by next week after incorporating them.<br>
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Best, <br>
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Vidushi<br>
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<div>I think your document will benefit from more referencing to the actual policies you are talking about. Also as Tatiana pointed out you need to resolve the comments first. I suggest set a deadline for people to comment, then resolve those comments and then
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<div>some of the comments in the google doc (e.g. Avri's comments) require further work and/or clarification, don't think the document can be sent to the PC as it is.</div>
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This document has now been reviewed and commented on by several people,<br>
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On 08/30/2016 07:43 PM, Vidushi Marda wrote:<br>
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> Please find the first draft comment to the gTLD Subsequent Procedure WG at this link:
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> While the request was extremely detailed with six subjects and specific questions under each, due to paucity of time, this draft only discusses over arching human rights concerns.<br>
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> ----- On Aug 26, 2016, at 7:57 PM, Kathy Kleiman <a href="mailto:kathy@KATHYKLEIMAN.COM" target="_blank">
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>> Hi Niels,<br>
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>> I think this idea is a very good one. I have been worried that we did<br>
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>> Group, especially on Community Groups. A few weeks ago, Avri was kind<br>
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>> participation. I think it is the perfect time to submit a comment --<br>
>> even a little late!<br>
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>> But quick note, at least in the US, next week is big end of summer<br>
>> vacation week and traditionally very quiet. Perhaps allowing a week for<br>
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>> Best and tx to you, Vidushi and the CCWP HR,<br>
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>> On 8/26/2016 7:50 AM, Niels ten Oever wrote:<br>
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>>> I hope this e-mail finds you all well. We just had a very productive<br>
>>> call of the CCWP HR in which we discussed several issues in which the<br>
>>> gTLD Subsequenty Procedures WG impacts human rights (community priority<br>
>>> procedure, how 'community' is defined, lack of gTLD applications from<br>
>>> the global south, etc).<br>
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>>> I am aware that the first official input/comment period of this WG is<br>
>>> over, but I think if we would send something in it might still be<br>
>>> considered, especially since the NCSG did not send comment yet.<br>
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>>> Vidushi has graciously offered to do the drafting, also based on the<br>
>>> report she initially drafted and which was accepted as CCWP HR document [0].<br>
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>>> So this is an early warning that you'll receive a draft comment on<br>
>>> Tuesday, if we want to it to be considered I think we would need to<br>
>>> submit it rather switfly, that's why I am sending this pre-warning so<br>
>>> you know you can excpect it. Stay tuned :)<br>
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>>> All the best,<br>
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