<html><body><div style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt; color: #000000"><div><span style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;">Dear All, </span><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;"><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;"><span style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;">Here is the final version of the NCSG comment to the gTLD Subsequent Procedures WG: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1IC7-KJz12XuDBFeEYiDMoh8I1ibks_McW0XqHh_nw/edit#. All comments have been addressed and resolved. Hoping that the policy committee can pick this up now. </span><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;"><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;"><span style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;">Best wishes, </span><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;"><br style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff;"><span style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;" data-mce-style="color: #000000; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff;">Vidushi </span><br></div><div><br></div><hr id="zwchr" data-marker="__DIVIDER__"><div data-marker="__HEADERS__"><b>From: </b>vidushi@cis-india.org<br><b>To: </b>vidushi@CIS-INDIA.ORG<br><b>Cc: </b>NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU<br><b>Sent: </b>Monday, September 19, 2016 11:06:35 AM<br><b>Subject: </b>Re: [Deadline for comments 9/9] Re: pre-warning draft comment to gTLD subsequent procedure WG<br></div><br><div data-marker="__QUOTED_TEXT__"><div style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt; color: #000000"><div>Dear All, <br><br>Here is the final version of the NCSG comment to the gTLD Subsequent Procedures WG: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1IC7-KJz12XuDBFeEYiDMoh8I1ibks_McW0XqHh_nw/edit#. All comments have been addressed and resolved. Hoping that the policy committee can pick this up now. <br><br>Best wishes, <br><br>Vidushi </div><br><span id="zwchr">----- On Sep 6, 2016, at 12:37 PM, Vidushi Marda <vidushi@CIS-INDIA.ORG> wrote:<br></span><div><blockquote style="border-left:2px solid #1010FF;margin-left:5px;padding-left:5px;color:#000;font-weight:normal;font-style:normal;text-decoration:none;font-family:Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt;"><div style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt; color: #000000"><div>Dear All, <br><br>I think the idea of deadlines for comments work well. Thanks for the suggestion Farzi. <br><br>Can we make the last day for comments/feedback on the doc this Friday the 9th? That way we should be able to send in the doc by next week after incorporating them.<br><br>Best, <br><br>Vidushi<br><br><span id="zwchr">----- On Sep 5, 2016, at 7:01 AM, Michael Oghia <mike.oghia@GMAIL.COM> wrote:<br></span></div><div><blockquote style="border-left: 2px solid #1010FF; margin-left: 5px; padding-left: 5px; color: #000; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; font-family: Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;"><div dir="ltr">+1 Farzi<div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small;">-Michael<br></span></div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><br></div></div></div>
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<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Sep 4, 2016 at 5:18 PM, farzaneh badii <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com" target="_blank">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin: 0 0 0 .8ex; border-left: 1px #ccc solid; padding-left: 1ex;"><div dir="ltr">Thank you Vidushi and Niels, <br><div><div>I think your document will benefit from more referencing to the actual policies you are talking about. Also as Tatiana pointed out you need to resolve the comments first. I suggest set a deadline for people to comment, then resolve those comments and then send it out to policy committee. This is what we did in the past and worked out well.</div></div><br><div>Best</div><br><div>Farzaneh </div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 4 September 2016 at 14:33, Tatiana Tropina <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:tatiana.tropina@gmail.com" target="_blank">tatiana.tropina@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin: 0 0 0 .8ex; border-left: 1px #ccc solid; padding-left: 1ex;"><div dir="ltr">Hi Niels and all,<div>some of the comments in the google doc (e.g. Avri's comments) require further work and/or clarification, don't think the document can be sent to the PC as it is.</div><div>Thanks!</div><span><span style="color: #888888;"><div>Tatiana </div></span></span></div><div><div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 4 September 2016 at 14:30, Niels ten Oever <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:lists@digitaldissidents.org" target="_blank">lists@digitaldissidents.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin: 0 0 0 .8ex; border-left: 1px #ccc solid; padding-left: 1ex;">Dear all,<br>
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This document has now been reviewed and commented on by several people,<br>
perhaps the policy committee can pick this up?<br>
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Best,<br>
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Niels<br>
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On 08/30/2016 07:43 PM, Vidushi Marda wrote:<br>
> Dear All,<br>
><br>
> Please find the first draft comment to the gTLD Subsequent Procedure WG at this link: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1IC7-KJz12XuDBFeEYiDMoh8I1ibks_McW0XqHh_nw/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1IC7-KJz12XuDBFeEYiDMoh8I1ibks_McW0XqHh_nw/edit?usp=sharing</a><br>
><br>
> While the request was extremely detailed with six subjects and specific questions under each, due to paucity of time, this draft only discusses over arching human rights concerns.<br>
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> I look forward to your feedback and comments.<br>
><br>
> Best,<br>
><br>
> Vidushi<br>
><br>
> ----- On Aug 26, 2016, at 7:57 PM, Kathy Kleiman <a href="mailto:kathy@KATHYKLEIMAN.COM" target="_blank">kathy@KATHYKLEIMAN.COM</a> wrote:<br>
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>> Hi Niels,<br>
>><br>
>> I think this idea is a very good one. I have been worried that we did<br>
>> not submit a comment to the New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Working<br>
>> Group, especially on Community Groups. A few weeks ago, Avri was kind<br>
>> enough to answer my questions about this, and encourage our NCSG<br>
>> participation. I think it is the perfect time to submit a comment --<br>
>> even a little late!<br>
>><br>
>> But quick note, at least in the US, next week is big end of summer<br>
>> vacation week and traditionally very quiet. Perhaps allowing a week for<br>
>> comment would enable more people to participate.<br>
>><br>
>> Best and tx to you, Vidushi and the CCWP HR,<br>
>><br>
>> Kathy<br>
>><br>
>><br>
>> On 8/26/2016 7:50 AM, Niels ten Oever wrote:<br>
>>> Dear all,<br>
>>><br>
>>> I hope this e-mail finds you all well. We just had a very productive<br>
>>> call of the CCWP HR in which we discussed several issues in which the<br>
>>> gTLD Subsequenty Procedures WG impacts human rights (community priority<br>
>>> procedure, how 'community' is defined, lack of gTLD applications from<br>
>>> the global south, etc).<br>
>>><br>
>>> I am aware that the first official input/comment period of this WG is<br>
>>> over, but I think if we would send something in it might still be<br>
>>> considered, especially since the NCSG did not send comment yet.<br>
>>><br>
>>> Vidushi has graciously offered to do the drafting, also based on the<br>
>>> report she initially drafted and which was accepted as CCWP HR document [0].<br>
>>><br>
>>> So this is an early warning that you'll receive a draft comment on<br>
>>> Tuesday, if we want to it to be considered I think we would need to<br>
>>> submit it rather switfly, that's why I am sending this pre-warning so<br>
>>> you know you can excpect it. Stay tuned :)<br>
>>><br>
>>> All the best,<br>
>>><br>
>>> Niels<br>
>>><br>
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