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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=FR link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Hello Shane and Ayden,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Thanks for your reply.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>@shane and all, I would like to share the following with you :<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>The RDS PDP WG has the job to gather all “possible” requirements for the next-gen RDS to replace the WHOIS protocol. So many document has been judged relevant to provide insightful issues to serve as inputs for the characteristics of the next-Gen RDS. However, WG found it impossible to read all document together as a team (or community) and agree one by one, document per document what can be a “possible” requirement and what can/should not be a requirement. Then it was proposed and adopted group members volunteer to read the docs and provide extract as many as input as possible. Than the ICANN staff works hard and concatenate all this requirements by namimg them appropriately without no change to the requirements themselves<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Thereffore the word “possible” means that the stated requirement may be removed at the end of the current phase if people judge so. However, it is not time to make this decision yet.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Consequently, if you find any bogus or meaningless information (according to you), please just make a comment to me offline and I will forward to the staff as necessary. At this stage, we just need to propose new “possible” requirements, so if you think you have a new requirement for the next-gen RDS that is not already in the RDS PDP list I previously sent (and apart from inputs you classify as bogus or legaless), you send it/them through.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>4.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Finally for other members I would clarify that each requirement has been given a specific annotation in the form of :</span><span lang=EN-US> [UP-D26-R06] : the first two letters identify the charter question (in this cas Users Purposes), the D26 identifies the input document (Annex A) from which the requirement has been extracted, and R06 means the 6<sup>th</sup> requirement).</span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>5.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US>I suggest to a sublist of requirements depending or based on your expertise or background. For instance, If you have experience in data privacy, you can check all requirement starting by [PR-Dxx-Ryy] and a new one if any. </span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>6.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US>For any new “possible” requirement, don’t forget to add the source document.</span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black'>--ff--<br>Best regards<br>------------------------------------------------------------------------------<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#C00000'>Farell FOLLY</span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black'>Africa 2.0 Foundation<o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black'>Chapter Head - 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It is not clear to me either how we can expect any meaningful contributions to this document. It is not only extraordinarily long, it lacks context and hyperlinks to supporting material. It has not even been reviewed yet by the Working Group – so it seems a little premature to me to be requesting thoughtful input from the constituencies. <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>What I can offer is a little context around why this document exists and what it is setting out to achieve. The leadership team for the Next Generation Registration Directory Service Policy Development Process working group has begun by extracting all the possible requirements for this service from the EWG Final Report, along with all the possible requirements obtained from other key inputs, rather than beginning by looking at, say, the privacy laws that might limit it's scope. So we're diving into the secondary and tertiary purposes of the RDS at the same time as we look at the most basic data elements. I consider it unfortunate, but please know that we (by which I mean, the NCUC members who are on the RDS PDP WG calls) did push back against this. Our preference had and has always been to begin from the premise of data minimisation, so I would say that we are not ideally placed to participate in this outreach activity, unless we find some very strong privacy or data protection points have been overlooked. <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I hope this is helpful,<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Ayden<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>On Mon, Jun 13, 2016 3:36 PM, Shane Kerr </span><a href="mailto:shane@TIME-TRAVELLERS.ORG" target="_blank"><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>shane@TIME-TRAVELLERS.ORG</span></a><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><blockquote style='border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0cm;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Farell,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>At 2016-06-13 11:30:10 +0100<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Farell FOLLY <</span><a href="mailto:farell@BENIN2POINT0.ORG"><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>farell@BENIN2POINT0.ORG</span></a><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> Few months ago I decided to join the NCSG in order to serve and defend the<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> interest of the community regarding Internet resources use. Before that, I<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> started working with the GNSO Policy Development Process Working Group (PDP<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> WG) to contribute in the development process of the Next Generation<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> Registration Directory Services (Next-Gen RDS). Time comes now that I engage<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> more and participate within this stakeholder Group. Therefore, I volunteer<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> to serve as a liaison/point of contact between NCSG and GNSO PDP WG as far<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> as the attached documents are concerned.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Cool, thanks for this!<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> 1. Read the outreach message 2 in attach<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> 2. Read and check the RDS PDP list of possible requirements, also in<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> attach<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> 3. Reply to this mail by asking any questions to me or adding<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> additional requirement<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> Please before replying to this e-mail to add a “new” requirement, make sure<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> you read the entire document and check whether this requirement was not<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> duplicated already. Also, ensure that you send your contact details (name,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>> first name, e-mail) if not explicitly included in your mail signature.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>[ Apologies if the following reads as a rant. It kind of is. Probably<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>my own fault for looking at policy stuff. ]<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Is there a summary of the PDF, or any kind of specific issues that seem<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>contentious that one would look at?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I ask because the PDF alone is over 100 pages. Is this a typical ICANN<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>document? I was going to have a look since I'm somewhat technical and<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>was involved with WHOIS in the distant past, but honestly I don't really<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>have the many days time that would be necessary to make any sense out<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>of this. :(<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>------<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I did skim a bit, and while parts of it are pretty clear:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>[UP-D01-R17] – Since it is likely that further [permissible<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>purposes] will be identified over time, any [gTLD registration<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>directory service] must be designed with extensibility in mind.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>(This is a bogus requirement, BTW. Without specific descriptions of the<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>expected changes then it is impossible to implement. It's like someone<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>saying “prepare for the weather tomorrow” without telling you what the<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>weather will be. Better to leave this out and let people make their own<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>design decisions.)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Other parts are complete legalese:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>[UP-D26-R06] – According to the Directive (30), whereas, in order<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>to be lawful, the processing of personal data must in addition be<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>carried out with the consent of the data subject or be necessary<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>for the conclusion or performance of a contract binding on the data<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>subject, or as a legal requirement, or for the performance of a<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>task carried out in the public interest or in the exercise of<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>official authority, or in the legitimate interests of a natural or<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>legal person, provided that the interests or the rights and<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>freedoms of the data subject are not overriding....subject to the<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>provisions allowing a data subject to object to the processing of<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>data regarding him, at no cost and without having to state his<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>reasons;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I mean, really, the last person to use “whereas” in English outside of<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>legal documents died before the invention of the telephone. ;) (The<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Wikipedia article on plain English suggests “because” or “since”, as<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>does the “</span><a href="http://www.plainlanguage.gov"><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>www.plainlanguage.gov</span></a><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>” site, although in this particular case<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I'd say just leave it out.)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I don't even know what the requirement is here. I read it 4 times and<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>can't figure it out. I feel sorry for the poor software engineer that<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>has to try to convert this to running code. :P<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Given the many hundreds of possible requirements, many of which are<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>written like this, I don't see any way that anyone who has anything<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>else to do for before the deadline can possibly hope to help<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>properly review this work, at least without some coordinated plan such<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>as “please review the following 10 requirements” for 50 volunteers.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Sorry for ranting. :(<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>--<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Shane<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></blockquote></div></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Ayden Férdeline<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><a href="https://community.icann.org/display/gnsosoi/Ayden+Férdeline+SOI"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";background:white'>Statement of Interest</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><!--[if gte vml 1]><v:shapetype id="_x0000_t75" coordsize="21600,21600" o:spt="75" o:preferrelative="t" path="m@4@5l@4@11@9@11@9@5xe" filled="f" stroked="f">
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