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Likewise - thanks Milton and all!<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 08/09/2015 10:10, Joy Liddicoat
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<div>Thank you Milton,</div>
<div>I agree with the proposed new language <br>
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Joy Liddicoat
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On 8/09/2015, at 14:28, Mueller, Milton L <<a
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">OK,
I have made some minor modifications based on these
discussions, the only significant one related to human
rights. The new language reads:
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">The
CCWG solicits comments on two different ways of
formulating ICANN’s commitment to human rights. Option
one expressed ICANN’s commitment “to respect the
fundamental human rights of the exercise of free
expression and the free flow of information.” Option 2
expressed ICANN’s commitment more broadly, “Within its
mission and in its operations, ICANN will be committed
to respect internationally recognized fundamental human
rights.”</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">With
one member organization exception, NCSG tends toward
support for the second, more general formulation. The
first formulation is too limited because other human
rights, such as privacy, are relevant to ICANN policies.
We do, however, recognize that a generic reference to
human rights might not work as effectively as more
specific requirements, and that freedom of expression
and privacy are two human rights most directly relevant
to ICANN’s policy activity. Our preference, therefore,
would be to formulate the commitment this way:
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<span
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its mission and in its operations, ICANN will be
committed to respect internationally recognized
fundamental human rights, in particular freedom of
expression and privacy.”</span><span
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hope the policy committee can approve the whole document
and get it submitted to the CCWG public comment period
tomorrow.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">compromise
phrasing like "... human rights, in particular<br>
freedom of expression and privacy" might work.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Works
for me, per the F2F discussions with other
stakeholders since summer 2014.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Matthew Shears
Director - Global Internet Policy and Human Rights
Center for Democracy & Technology
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