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I think this is cross threaded...the PPSAI comment period is about
privacy proxy services. Working group, which includes me, Kathy
Kleiman, David Cake, Amr ElSadr, and now James Gannon, has been
going for about a year and a half, and this is the first draft
report.<br>
Cheers Stephanie Perrin<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2015-05-06 9:26, Paul Rosenzweig
wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I
assume that the comments should NOT be drafted by those of
us who are already working on the CCWG. But I think that we
(James, Robin, Edward, me, others?) would be happy to
highlight the “big” issues … From my perspective they are:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">1)<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">A
Fundamental Bylaw defining ICANN’s mission to avoide mission
creep<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><span
style="mso-list:Ignore">2)<span style="font:7.0pt
"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">An
enhanced and binding Independent Review Process to
adjudicate both process compliance and substantive
compliance by ICANN Board and Staff; and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><span
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"Times New Roman""> </span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">A
new community-based oversight mechanism with the power to a)
recall the Board, or individual members thereof; b) approve
the budget; and c) approve the strategic plan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Others
may disagree, but to my mind the rest is less important.
And I am not sure what others in the NCSG think of these …
though I hope they like them …<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Paul<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Paul
Rosenzweig<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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href="mailto:paul.rosenzweigesq@redbranchconsulting.com"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#0563C1">paul.rosenzweig@redbranchconsulting.com</span></a><span
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<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">O:
+1 (202) 547-0660<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">M:
+1 (202) 329-9650<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">VOIP:
+1 (202) 738-1739<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Skype:
paul.rosenzweig1066<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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href="http://www.redbranchconsulting.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=19&Itemid=9"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#0563C1">Link
to my PGP Key</span></a><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">
Rafik Dammak [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM">mailto:rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM</a>] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, May 6, 2015 7:10 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU">NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: FW: Public Comment Forum is now open
-PPSAI<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi James,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">thanks for sharing this announcement, <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">looking for someone to take the lead
for drafting the comment/statement for NCSG.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Rafik<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">2015-05-06 5:29 GMT+09:00 James
Gannon <<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:james@cyberinvasion.net" target="_blank">james@cyberinvasion.net</a>>:<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Hi
All,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Tis
the season!</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Another
public comment period opens, this is an
important one for us and we would value any
feedback or questions from the group.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">-James</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> <a
moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org"
target="_blank">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
[mailto:<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org"
target="_blank">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Mary Wong<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 05, 2015 9:21 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org"
target="_blank">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Public
Comment Forum is now open</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Dear
WG members,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">In
accordance with the WG’s latest Work Plan, our
Initial Report was submitted yesterday for
publication and public comment. I’m pleased to
inform you that the Public Comment Forum is
now open on the ICANN website: <a
moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ppsai-initial-2015-05-05-en"
target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ppsai-initial-2015-05-05-en</a>.
A link to the Forum has also been placed on
ICANN’s Announcement page, so that anyone who
accesses the ICANN website to follow recent
developments will also see it: <a
moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.icann.org/news/announcements"
target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/news/announcements</a>.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">As
is the case with other GNSO Working Groups,
staff will compile a Public Comment Review
Tool to assist the WG with its analysis of all
the public comments that come in. The WG
chairs will discuss when it might be desirable
to begin this analysis, and notice of the
start of those meetings will be sent out
accordingly.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Following
feedback received, the chairs have requested
that staff clarify that the optional template
being provided to assist commenters with
structuring their input is an additional
option only, and that comments submitted via
the Forum are definitely very welcome. We have
also added specific references throughout the
template to correspond to specific
Recommendations and Sections in the Initial
Report, to facilitate easier review of the
Initial Report.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Please
note also that as the suggested 60-day period
would have ended on a weekend, the Forum has
been set to close on a weekday following that
original date, thus making for a full 63-day
public comment period.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Thank
you all for your efforts, contributions and
hard work in ensuring that a substantive
report was completed and sent out for
community input at this time. We look forward
to continuing the work as the WG proceeds
toward our Final Report!</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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