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<div class="moz-forward-container">we meet again Monday.<br>
there is a drive to finalize at that meeting so that if can be on
the agenda for the next GNSO mtg.<br>
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<td>[Accountability-dt] Charter for Circulation</td>
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<td>Fri, 31 Oct 2014 17:15:10 +0000</td>
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<td>Grace Abuhamad <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org"><grace.abuhamad@icann.org></a></td>
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<td><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:accountability-dt@icann.org">accountability-dt@icann.org</a>
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:accountability-dt@icann.org"><accountability-dt@icann.org></a></td>
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<pre>Hi all,
Here attached are the redline and clean versions of the charter
incorporating comments from Bart, Matthew, and Izumi.
Izumi ‹ I think your main concern (if I read your edits correctly) was
keeping the line about the mailing list. That line is still in the charter,
but I had moved it down one paragraph in the last draft iteration to include
it with other tools for the CCWG.
Main changes:
* Accepted all of Bart's and Matthew's edits
* Per Matthew's comment about clarity between the two cross community
groups, I changed CCWG to "CCWG-Accountability" and CWG to "CWG-Stewardship"
in the whole text
* Per Matthew's comment about "other groups'" I included a link to the ICG
RFP and wrote out who those ³other groups² are (the numbers and protocol
parameters communities)
Some comments were unanswered, so I have copied them below for discussion on
the list. They are in the redline, but I made the clean version "really
clean" so that it's easy to circulate to your communities.
* (Grace) referring to the stakeholder definition: Should we include a
citation? The definition text seems to be in a pay-only document.
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://www.efqm.org/understanding-an-organisations-stakeholders">http://www.efqm.org/understanding-an-organisations-stakeholders</a>
* Action: Keith to provide questions asap no later then Monday
Talk to you on Monday,
Grace
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