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    Thanks Tamir, much appreciated that you took the time to read it!  I
    am far too close to the document, need someone with new and neutral
    eyes to do the reality check.<br>
    I would not want to write off these mechanisms as useless....it is
    just they are not a match for some of the other mandatory
    requirements, and they are, as I put in the comments, the caboose at
    the end of the train.  Need to have the privacy policy first....<br>
    Cheers Steph<br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 14-06-09 4:03 PM, Tamir Israel
      wrote:<br>
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      FWIW, it seems to me on a quick read that your concerns are on
      point, Steph.<br>
      <br>
      First, you flag that while one of the core objectives of this RDS
      was to provide some privacy over WHOIS, most individuals will not
      be able to shield their identity from the general public.
      Registrant name and address (but not email address) are 'gated'
      and hence not available to the general public. But, as you say in
      your note, all registrants are obligated to provide legal contact
      info which will be publicly available. This is evident in Annex E
      and also in footnote 39. While many big companies may use legal
      counsel or other proxies to register, most individuals and even
      small businesses will need to use their own name and contact info,
      thereby defeating the purpose of permitting their contact info to
      remain 'gated'. So the end result is that more data elements are
      collected and centralized, without the anticipated <i>pro quo</i>
      of having less information 'gated' or 'publicly available'.<br>
      <br>
      Second, you flag that the RDS' very ambitious data protection
      project is problematic and will not serve to effectively protect
      even 'gated' data. I think I agree. As far as I can tell, the EWG
      proposes to adopt a tiered approach to data protection for RDS
      data. It is certainly innovative, but I think ultimately it'll be
      ineffective since the EWG report sets way too many parameters in
      stone to permit for the data protection mechanisms it adopts to
      operate.<br>
      <br>
      The privacy protection mechanisms suggested by the EWG are:<br>
      (1) First, they wish to encode some basic privacy principles and
      apply them across all RDS players by means of contract law, backed
      up by regulatory enforcement in those jurisdictions that require
      such things (not clear how ICANN is going to 'harmonize a basic
      level of data protection rights', something that has been tried
      and failed repeatedly in multiple fora in the past). <br>
      (2) Second, they intend to localize RDS data storage within a
      jurisdiction(s) with strong and existing data protection rules
      (it's not clear how this jurisdiction(s) will be picked). <br>
      (3) Finally, there will be a 'rules engine' that seeks to somehow
      codify data protection rules for all the world's jurisdictions and
      to, again somehow, apply these to different data elements based on
      where these are transferred to, processed, etc. Presumably, data
      will be marked up based on jurisdictions in which it was
      stored/processed, and this will provide insight into applicable
      laws (this ignores realities of the laws of jurisdiction, unless
      they intend to impose some blanket forum selection clause in and
      impose it on all elements of the RDS ecosystem). <br>
      <br>
      Ultimately, though, as Steph notes, these efforts are not helpful,
      as Registrants are forced to 'consent' to a long and extremely
      broad permissible purposes at point of collection (p. 42 --
      Stephs' dissent is noted in footnote 7). Once this consent is
      obtained, a large number of entities can access, use and further
      disclose the information in question for the many permissible
      purposes. While the form of consent is subject to the over-arching
      harmonized privacy principles (1) and to whatever additional
      jurisdictional rules are piled on (2) and (3), the list of
      permissible purposes is not variable, and appears offered on a
      'take it or leave it' basis. This leaves minimal latitude for any
      meaningful operation of data protection principles (except,
      perhaps, those relating to data security, access and
      accuracy/integrity). <br>
      <br>
      Nor is there any opportunity to minimize collection, as this too
      is 'hard wired' into the EWG's report, which provide a very long
      list of mandatory data elements. By contrast, an explicit 'opt-in'
      mechanism is adopted for governing whether any data elements a
      registrant provides that are gated by default can be made public.
      This is good, but it's not clear to me how it helps, as the core
      identifying data elements are already public.<br>
      <br>
      In terms of law enforcement access, they basically write off any
      issue since apparently the data in question is not private enough
      in their opinion to warrant any legal protection at all under any
      jurisdiction. Nonetheless, they feel the need to locate RDS data
      in "jurisdiction(s) where law enforcement is globally trusted".
      Not sure what that means.<br>
      <br>
      Perhaps ironically, the document recognizes the need for anonymity
      in this context. But it only does so in the context of the proxy
      service and secure protected credentials which, as steph points
      out in her note, are ineffective in the context of individual
      registrants.<br>
      <br>
      Overall, this seems like an incredibly and unnecessarily complex
      system that could be managed far more efficiently with simple
      contactability, plus an ICANN-run mechanism for identification
      upon demonstration of clear need.<br>
      <br>
      I could be missing something, though. And also apologies for the
      very lengthy email....<br>
      <br>
      Best,<br>
      Tamir<br>
      <br>
      On 6/8/2014 10:54 AM, Stephanie Perrin wrote:
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        Folks let me say this:<br>
        1.  Milton, you were not supposed to publish it!  I needed to
        edt it to reflect the new status of it being a minority report,
        and also no mention of JF Baril<br>
        2.  We need to be sure I am correct.  IF they are right and i
        have misread the report, then I look like an idiot.  <br>
        3.  Most of the report is still concensus.  AS I think I said in
        the 3 pager, recently, certain principles put everything
        slightly out of balance....<br>
        Sheesh.  Can they bann me from ICANN?<br>
        ON a positive note, I must say your blog is well read Milton, I
        got a sweet note from Mikey.  I guess he knows what I feel like
        right now...<br>
        cheers steph<br>
        <br>
        <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2014-06-08, 3:48 AM, Rafik
          Dammak wrote:<br>
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          <p dir="ltr">probably "occupy" the 2 public sessions for EWG
            i.e. attending them ,  ask the hard questions and debunk the
            myth of having consensus.<br>
            privacy issue was suggested by Marilia as 1 of the topics
            for the meeting with Board too,<br>
            we also should comment the report itself in due time.</p>
          <p dir="ltr">Rafik<br>
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              <div>p. 6  "This Final Report, including its
                recommendations and proposed principles for the
                next- generation RDS, reflects a consensus.”</div>
              <div><br>
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              <div>p. 164  "With the delivery of this Final Report and
                its 180 consensus-supported principles, the Board’s
                vision has indeed materialized.”</div>
              <div><br>
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              <div>p. 165 "Among the EWG members were seasoned
                entrepreneurs and global leaders (Ajayi, Ala- Pietilä,
                Neylon, Rasmussen, and Shah). Their collective expertise
                in balancing risks and their results-oriented problem
                solving style paved the way to reaching an
                early consensus among the EWG.”</div>
              <div><br>
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              <div>This characterization doesn’t seem to quite fit with
                Stephanie’s excellent and (astonishingly)
                suppressed Dissenting Report…</div>
              <div><br>
              </div>
              <div>How shall we proceed in London?</div>
              <div><br>
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              <div>Bill<br>
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                                  Michel [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
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                                  <b>Sent:</b><span> </span>samedi 7
                                  juin 2014 19:36<br>
                                  <b>Subject:</b><span> </span>Expert
                                  Working Group on gTLD Directory
                                  Services (EWG) Final Report</span></div>
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                              lang="EN-US">The Expert Working Group on
                              gTLD Directory Services (EWG) has issued
                              their </span><span
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style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank"><span
                                  style="color:rgb(17,85,204)">Final
                                  Report</span></a>. Given your group's
                              interest in this topic, I wanted to bring
                              this to your attention, along with the
                              public sessions the EWG has scheduled at
                              the ICANN London meeting:</span><span
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                                style="font-size:14pt;font-family:'Times
                                New Roman',serif">An introduction to the
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                                  target="_blank"><span
                                    style="color:rgb(17,85,204)">EWG
                                    Overview of Final Report</span></a>,
                                Monday, 23 June, 1515 – 1615</span><span
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                                discussion sessions: </span><span
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style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank"><span
                                      style="color:rgb(17,85,204)">EWG
                                      Final Report Discussion Session</span></a>, Monday,


                                  23 June, 1700 - 1900</span><span
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                                    New
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                                    Final Report Discussion Session</span></a><span
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                                  New Roman',serif;color:rgb(34,34,34)">,
                                  Wednesday, 25 June, 0800 </span><span
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                            <span
                              style="font-size:14pt;font-family:'Times
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                              Final Report fulfills the ICANN Board's
                              directive to help redefine the purpose and
                              provision of gTLD registration data, and
                              provides a foundation to help the ICANN
                              community (through the GNSO) create a new
                              global policy for gTLD directory services.
                              This report represents the culmination of
                              an intense 15 month period of work during
                              which this <a moz-do-not-send="true"
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style="color:rgb(149,79,114);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank"><span
                                  style="color:rgb(17,85,204)">diverse
                                  group of volunteers</span></a> created
                              an alternative to today's WHOIS to better
                              serve the global Internet community -- a
                              next-generation Registration Directory
                              Service (RDS).</span><span
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                              EWG looks forward to discussing this with
                              the ICANN community. Thank you for sharing
                              this notice broadly.</span><span
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                              Michel</span><span
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                              Strategic Initiatives</span><span
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                                href="mailto:denise.michel@icann.org"
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                                target="_blank">denise.michel@icann.org</a></span></div>
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                    William J. Drake<br>
                    International Fellow & Lecturer<br>
                      Media Change & Innovation Division, IPMZ<br>
                      University of Zurich, Switzerland<br>
                    Chair, Noncommercial Users Constituency, <br>
                      ICANN, <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                      href="http://www.ncuc.org" target="_blank">www.ncuc.org</a><br>
                    <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                      href="mailto:william.drake@uzh.ch" target="_blank">william.drake@uzh.ch</a> (direct), <a
                      moz-do-not-send="true"
                      href="mailto:wjdrake@gmail.com" target="_blank">wjdrake@gmail.com</a>
                    (lists),<br>
                      <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                      href="http://www.williamdrake.org" target="_blank">www.williamdrake.org</a><br>
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