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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">In some sense, the ATRT2 report is important.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">In a system with shockingly weak accountability, this is one (pathetic) mechanism.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I will try to make time to read this report, but if Avri could provide some initial pointers as to what she thought was praiseworthy, outrageous, where issues
were ducked, etc., it would be helpful. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Robin Gross<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, October 24, 2013 6:07 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> NCSG-DISCUSS@LISTSERV.SYR.EDU<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [NCSG-Discuss] Fwd: [liaison6c] Request for comments: Second Accountability and Transparency Review Team (ATRT 2) Draft Report & Recommendations<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">Subject: [liaison6c] Request for comments: Second Accountability and Transparency Review Team (ATRT 2) Draft Report & Recommendations</span></b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">Date:
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Comment Open Date: <span class="date-display-single">21 October 2013</span></span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l3 level1 lfo2"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">AoC</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l3 level1 lfo2"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">ATRT 2</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l3 level1 lfo2"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Policy Processes</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l3 level1 lfo2"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Reviews/Improvements</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l3 level1 lfo2"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Transparency/Accountability</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">To inform its work, ATRT 2 seeks input on its Draft Report & Recommendations.</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Current Status: </span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">ATRT 2 is completing its analysis and preparing to hold consultations with Community, staff and Board, with the goal of issuing final recommendations and report by 31 December 2013.</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Next Steps: </span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">ATRT 2 seeks public comments and will hold consultations during ICANN 48 in Buenos Aires.</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Staff Contact: </span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Alice Jansen (on behalf of ATRT2)</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""><a href="mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org?subject=More%20information%20on%20the%20Second%20Accountability%20and%20Transparency%20Review%20Team%20%28ATRT%202%29%20Draft%20Report%20and%20Recommendations%20public%20comment%20period"><span lang="EN-US">Email
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="fieldset-legend"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Detailed Information</span></span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Section I: Description, Explanation, and Purpose: </span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">With the goal of producing final recommendations by 31 December 2013, the Second Accountability and Transparency Review Team (ATRT 2), mandated by paragraph 9.1 of the Affirmation of Commitments
(AoC), is completing its analysis and holding consultations with Community, staff and Board. To inform its work, the ATRT 2 now seeks input from the Community on its<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""><a href="https://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/draft-recommendations-15oct13-en.pdf"><span lang="EN-US">Draft
Report & Recommendations</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">[PDF, 3.06 MB] compiled for the Community's consideration. Community participation is essential to the success of the review,
and all input will be carefully considered. The ATRT 2 welcomes any additional feedback.</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Section II: Background: </span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">The Second Accountability and Transparency Review Team (ATRT2) issues this request for Public Comment on a set of<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""><a href="https://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/draft-recommendations-15oct13-en.pdf"><span lang="EN-US">Draft
Proposed Recommendations</span></a></span><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""> </span></span><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">[PDF, 3.06 MB] that it has developed as part of its review of ICANN's
execution of its commitments to accountability and transparency under the Affirmation of Commitments (AoC). The ATRT2 will provide final recommendations to the ICANN Board no later than December 31, 2013.</span><span lang="FR"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">ATRT 2, mandated by paragraph 9.1 of the Affirmation of Commitments (AoC), commenced its activities in February 2013. The Review Team has collected feedback from the Community by means of a questionnaire as
well as numerous consultations during the past six months. ATRT 2 has considered this feedback carefully in drafting its preliminary recommendations. With the goal of producing final recommendations by 31 December 2013, the Review Team is currently in the
process of completing its analysis and preparing to hold consultations with Community, staff and Board.</span><span lang="FR"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">ATRT 2 has three fundamental tasks under the AoC:</span><span lang="FR"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">to assess ICANN's implementation of Recommendations of the three prior AoC Review Teams;</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">to offer new Recommendations to the ICANN Board to further improve ICANN's accountability and transparency ; and</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">to offer Recommendations concerning improvements to the Review process itself.</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">ATRT 2 has organized the work into four work streams:</span><span lang="FR"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">ATRT1 – review of implementation of ATRT1 Review Team recommendations and offer any follow-on recommendations – AoC 9.1 (a)-(e);</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Security, Stability and Resiliency – review of implementation of SSR Review Team recommendations - AoC 9.2(a)-(c);</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">WHOIS – review of implementation of WHOIS Review Team recommendations AoC 9.3.1;</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Consider the extent to which assessments and actions undertaken by ICANN have been successful in ensuring that ICANN is acting transparently, is accountable
for its decision-making, and acts in the public interest.</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<p><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">To inform its work, the ATRT 2 now seeks input from the<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""><a href="https://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/draft-recommendations-15oct13-en.pdf"><span lang="EN-US">Community
on Proposed Draft Recommendations</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">[PDF, 3.06 MB] compiled for the Community's consideration. Community participation is essential to the success of
the review, and all input will be carefully considered. The ATRT 2 welcomes any additional feedback.</span><span lang="FR"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Section III: Document and Resource Links: </span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Section IV: Additional Information: </span><span lang="FR" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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